Sunday, February 8, 2009

Flowing Love....

Hug
Kisses
Lip locked
Am all blushed,

Sweet whispers
Soft breaths
Feather like kisses,
Melting the moment

Heat intact
Am all looking back
Wondering why we are
Where we are at

Our hearts are young
And the spark is alive
We could exchange some energy
And could do with some loving

Hugs
Liplocked
Feather Kisses
Just at the right moment..!

2 comments:

Unknown said...

I simply love this, i think it's the best thing you've ever written.

you're like a painter in this, using large strokes to create an overall masterpiece.

i like it overall, and i like individual lines of it as well.

well done! as a writer i know how hard it is to convey emotion, and clearly, you're feeling this for real.

hugs!

Disruptina said...

Wow! dats the best & d most treasured comment iv ever heard in my life...i almost hv tears in my eyes...seriously...thank u so much...uve made my day...